(Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM)EverlastingBlader Wrote:  Meh, Reading beyblade is dumb without images. I don't care how well you describe the blade, it's going to be different to others imagination.

That's, like, one of the greatest things about writing. You're free to interpret each scene in your own mind, whereas on TV, everything is set out for you, giving you no room for interpretation.

(Nov 21 2008 03:51 PM)utsavkotrial Wrote:  P.S. dont wrry bout the other guys their veteran bladers not anime fans.

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I'm an anime fan, and yet I really don't think most of this is a good idea.

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I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime.

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okkk okkk i was just yapping. but come on this stuff can work!!!

(Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM)B Wrote:  I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime.

I was referring specifically to the Beyblade anime. I'm not really much of an anime fan, though I was a few years ago.

Now, I'll watch it if it's convenient, or if I happen to turn it on. That's really it.

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Quote:No need to make 8 year olds kick the crap out of each other.

Could NOT stop laughing at this thought.

This is taking a while though, even kenny writes faster than this... (quality should CLEARLY be over quanitity though but seeing the first page I can't tell that this has either tbh).

Is it just me that thinks 'Zero Evolution' is a dumb name? I know it's REALLY stupid but every time I think of "zero evolution" I think of this:



Sorry, but that's the best way I could think of to describe how I feel about the name.

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Things that loom in the darkness aren't always as you'd expect.

i'm glad someone finally pointed out that zero evolution is a bad name

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the name makes zero sense its sound like a cool idea but change the name and make the main character a female who's main blade is dems or somethin or an evil main caracter btw if u need an editor ill help u out.

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Make your own crappy banner yourself, I didn't cause that's just plain poppycock

I'm the editor for this story. Dranzer will hopefully post the edited version of it later on - you'll see an improvement in the writing standard. Dranzer's writing style is very different to mine and as it is his fanfic to begin with, I'm going to keep to his style and not override it with my own. Please make only constructive critcism about this, not shallow, juvenile remarks such as how "dumb" it is since it is the only way a writer can improve.

Ok there's a difference between being a writer looking to improve and being a writer who's stuck on a lame concept that they won't let go of.

Honestly his writing is fine, its just the subject matter and overall plot that is holding him back.

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